Most dangerous writting

once upon a time the was man called Jake. He live's in new York. One day he heard some noise coming from outside. He was wondering what the heck was going on outside.He saw some evil people with shotguns and some TNT. So he look up and saw jets helicopter he look back down and saw some tanks. He grab a rock from the ground and bang hes head he thought it was just a dream but no i wasn't. after 2 mins i woke up and look everything was broken down mostly no one survived it only him. finally he became a science person and did a little chemist and saved half of everyone's life.